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Settler Creeks Travel Missions Desciption | Never Brief On An Empty Stomach

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Description:
A sentence in the description is grammatically incorrect by containing a double negative.

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"I should eat before I ask you for help, otherwise I can't think straight.
Since the small game day was such a failure, there weren't a lot less customers yesterday, most of the meat went to waste. But atleast those who were here got their bellies full so hopefully there will be more people by tonight.
"

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Since the small game day was such a failure, there were a lot less customers yesterday, most of the meat went to waste.
<OR>
Since the small game day was such a failure, there weren't a lot customers yesterday, most of the meat went to waste.
Semper vigilans, Numquam dubitabilis - "Always Vigilant, Never Doubtful"
https://www.boone-crockett.org/minimum- ... n-big-game
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Re: Settler Creeks Travel Missions Desciption | Never Brief On An Empty Stomach

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*CORRECTION*
The second suggestion should read as follows
Since the small game day was such a failure, there weren't a lot of customers yesterday, most of the meat went to waste.
Semper vigilans, Numquam dubitabilis - "Always Vigilant, Never Doubtful"
https://www.boone-crockett.org/minimum- ... n-big-game
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Re: Settler Creeks Travel Missions Desciption | Never Brief On An Empty Stomach

Post by Pucu »

Dubitabilus wrote:Description:
A sentence in the description is grammatically incorrect by containing a double negative.
Thanks for reporting this Dubitabilus, with the kind help of the amazing TheSheWolf we are in the process of improving the grammar, spelling, and tone of all the missions packs' text. We'll definitely keep this one in mind too.

P.S. Tagging TheSheWolf for her information ;)
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